The Beautifully Twisted Mind of Young

Amen

Amen (Jeezy)

Please, Lord, forgive me for my blashphemy and sinnin ways;
And if it’s Devil’s Nectar then forgive me for the Gin and J’s;
If it wasn’t for my parents they I could’ve gone in different ways;
They never gave a fuck about me, I’m the son they didn’t raise;
They jus left my ass to die but who’s to say I lived enough??;
That’s only up to You and me so shit, damn right I gived em up;
Momma sniffin coke and daddy ain’t no where to be found;
The only time they wanted me was when they caught the rebound;
Tax time and crash time, whichever one came first;
I used to wonder why they never loved me til my fuckin brain hurt;
Now I could give a fuck less about either one of em;
They can say what they fuckin want but I ain’t no son of em;
You’re supposed to love your kids and protect em, at least feed they ass;
But they left a nigga(youngin) homeless so I say fuck em, I don’t need they ass;
Your boy’s been self sufficient since i could git up out the play pen;
And “God’s” kept my ass alive, all I can say is Amen….
YOUNG.

Not into god but I thought it was a decent verse

• 5 Sep 2012

liketotallyfacetious asked: I was trying to response to your verse on here, but I don't know how to talk or message on Tumblr :/ But your stuff is purrrty great! Yes, these ARE pieces of art. I don't know of anyone who disagrees with that statement though...

Haha idk how to either, but what were you going to say about it/them?? And I think sometimes they’re art but more importantly they’re art inside of art, multi syllables and ironicism(??) And wordplay and rhyme schemes and all sorts of writing techniques, jus a couple hours ago I wrote 6 verses including that No Lie one, I’m planning on posting more in a minute.

• 4 Sep 2012

“No Lie” originally by 2 Chainz ft Drake

Another verse I’ve decided to post, i’d post more but it seems that nobody cares for my creativity only that of others so the 100’s of pages of raps/rhymes/poems I have will remain put away. Here’s a fresh one, hot off the press. Enjoy :D.

Purple skunk in a purple blunt, no lie, dog, I’m turtled up;
Chillin wit a model type that I spoil so she curdled up;
That’s nasty milk, she’s classy built and I graduated wit flyin colors;
She already know how good I am so she claim she bringin diamond rubbers;
That’s expensive dick, I extend it quick cuz I know jus what these pro’s want;
That’s good head and great dick off a couple pills so I don’t goes soft;
Got her clothes off, don’t doze off, girl, we ain’t even started yet;
I know you feel my swagger cuz I’m fully dressed and still got it wet;
Bring that fine ass and a wine glass on over here to my lap, girl;
Drink this Moscato I’ll sip this Hennessy, welcome to my rap world;
You’re fine as fuck, no dime, a buck, so we’re playin out all 4 quarters;
I grab your ass, you scratch my back, and I follow all of your orders;
Like “eat me out” and “deep and south”, and then you climb on top of me;
You ride it like Ciara, damn, I must have hit the lottery! (NO LIE, NO LIE, NO LIE!!!)

YOUNG

• 4 Sep 2012